I just had to stop
Sep. 18th, 2009 05:30 amI was reading the story. It was a little iffy on the writing, but I was getting some smiles out of the character interactions, so I was like, I can read past this.
Then I found out that Jack's feelings for Daneil had been festering for years.
And I just had to stop right there.
Then I found out that Jack's feelings for Daneil had been festering for years.
And I just had to stop right there.
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Date: 2009-09-18 08:41 pm (UTC)ETA: I had earlier stopped short on Jack's gravely voice. Somehow not the same as gravelly ... not even the same part of speech.
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Date: 2009-09-18 11:00 pm (UTC)Daniel: "...he heard myself say..."
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