I just had to stop

[brainofck]

I was reading the story. It was a little iffy on the writing, but I was getting some smiles out of the character interactions, so I was like, I can read past this.

Then I found out that Jack's feelings for Daneil had been festering for years.

And I just had to stop right there.

Comments

[princessofgeeks]

lol. festering, like a pimple.

[catsmeow]

Festering - like a boil on his butt, only Jack would need a much bigger tube of ointment to clear up his "Daniel" infection.

[green_grrl]

I think he needs a full-on hot-beef injection for that! ;-)

[catsmeow]

LOL!! Yes! It's like homeopathic medicine where the only cure is a bit more of what's ailing you. :D

[green_grrl]

Aha ha ha ha! I just ran across the fic, and I stopped there, too. You were obviously faster off the mark reading recs this morning than I was. :D

ETA: I had earlier stopped short on Jack's gravely voice. Somehow not the same as gravelly ... not even the same part of speech.

[sarkka]

If it's the same fic I lost it already at
Daniel: "...he heard myself say..."

[brainofck]

Some things just can't be let go. *shakes head*

[brainofck]

*cries a little*

[brainofck]

*snorts*

[brainofck]

I find it interesting, the reports that came back on this - how much people could take before they stopped. Like, apparently I'm good for lack of spell check (or confused spell check) and also for a slip up from third person to first person, but word choice was finally what killed it for me. Though I have to admit, without a rec, I would never have read past the first paragraph.

[brainofck]

Like I said to green_grrl, it's interesting to see exactly how far we will all go... :D

[green_grrl]

I have different amounts of tolerance on different days. First paragraph I was also thinking, "Not my Jack and Daniel." The clues to backbutton kept piling up and, frankly, I think I gave up on "festering" because I realized that it was the fic you had backbuttoned out of. Why would I subject myself to more punishment than you would? :D