What I'm thinking about right now
Jul. 9th, 2005 10:14 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
brainofck"While you're chatting with Jack, you should ask him what I'm going to think of holding hands with a goa'uld on the couch," he said.
*snickers to self*
The voice in this second part is completely different from the exposition piece I just posted and from the drabbles.
It reads lighter and feels more playful.
I'm not at all sure how I feel about that.
This is the Dark Muse conflict. How playful can coerced sex be? And for that matter, this is more intense, because this is going to be a lot more like rape. I think the drabbles reflect that. What I'm writing right now does not.
Of course, on the other hand, at the moment, I'm not planning any actual sex for this section. More of a makeout session on the couch. Maybe that's the difference.
It's all fun and games til someone gets an eye put out.
Oh. Um. Perhaps that is not the most appropriate expression for this situation.
*snickers more*
OK. See what I have to put up with from myself today?!
*snickers to self*
The voice in this second part is completely different from the exposition piece I just posted and from the drabbles.
It reads lighter and feels more playful.
I'm not at all sure how I feel about that.
This is the Dark Muse conflict. How playful can coerced sex be? And for that matter, this is more intense, because this is going to be a lot more like rape. I think the drabbles reflect that. What I'm writing right now does not.
Of course, on the other hand, at the moment, I'm not planning any actual sex for this section. More of a makeout session on the couch. Maybe that's the difference.
It's all fun and games til someone gets an eye put out.
Oh. Um. Perhaps that is not the most appropriate expression for this situation.
*snickers more*
OK. See what I have to put up with from myself today?!
