Couldn't bring myself to include it, but...

[brainofck]

An idea that I just couldn't go so far as to include in the current chapter of Arena. Snipped here for the amusement of myself and uisgich



Sean's stroke was swift.

Sennet found himself looking up at his body as it fell, then his world spun strangely. When it settled, he had a perfect view from under the table as Sean casually wiped the blood from his sword on Sennet's twitching leg. Sean met his eyes as they clouded over.

He should have left town after all.

Yup. Me and Peter Jackson. Tight.

*snickers*

Comments

[uisgich.livejournal.com]

Yay!!

I don't see the problem with leaving it in :)

Not gorey, just nicely disturbing *grins manically*

Nicely disturbing

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

*snort*

Hmmmmm. Despite everything, I just don't think it fits with the style of the overall piece...

*snickers more*

[seleneheart]

Oh, yeah, perfect revenge.

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

:)

[peterjackson.livejournal.com]

*twitches*

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

You love it. You know you do. :)

[wyldestarr.livejournal.com]

Is it bad that I read "Sean's stroke was swift" as alluding to something else entirely? o_O *grins*

But DUDE! Very cool, a lil short, but very cool. :)

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

something else entirely

*snickers*

I'm not sure I trust you people anymore. :) Buncha sickos.

But I was writing from Sennet's POV when his head came off, and this was what I *wanted* to write...