The Squirrels Were in my Bird Feeder Again

[brainofck]

Revisited from last night's post.

Title: The Squirrels Were in my Bird Feeder Again
Author: muck_a_luck, posting in brainofck
Pairing: Daniel Jackson/Jack O'Neill (pre-slash)
Rating: G
Summary: Jack's shirt won't fit.
Content/warnings: Wing!fic. (But SG-1-style!)
Words: 376
Disclaimer: If anybody is planning a script like this for SG-1, I'm certainly not going to claim any rights to it. However, I'd be delighted to work in a co-writing/consulting/first-reader/advisory-type capacity, with my fee to be negotiated at that time. :D
Archive rights: Absolutely none. My journals only. muck_a_luck and brainofck
The Matrix: Tropes:Wing!fic. The Matrix is located here.






"Um. Jack..."

"Daniel?"

"Did you notice anything, uh, unusual this morning?"

"Well... The squirrels were in my bird feeder again, even though I bought that new one with the plexiglas shield. I'm gonna get out the pellet gun again, I swear. And they had donuts in the first guard house, but they gave me one, so I'm gonna keep it under my hat for now..."

"Huh. I was thinking about something, uh, more..." He made a sort of broad flapping motion with his hands.

"More?" Jack imitated the motion. Sometimes Jack wondered about that linguistics doctorate.

"Oh, my God! Sir!" Carter yelped from the doorway.

"Carter?" Jack asked, turning to his 2IC. Teal'c stood behind her, one eyebrow arching toward the top of his shiny bald head.

"Um..." Then Daniel made the flappy arm gesture again. And Carter nodded frantically, imitating him.

"Oh, for the love of..." Jack huffed, deciding to ignore both of them and just get on with it.

"What the HELL is wrong with this shirt?" he groused. Stupid base laundry. Coudn't get anything right.

"I think you're going to have to start doing something new about shirts," Daniel said softly.

He began to circle around him. Jack monitored him warily in this peripheral vision.

Which was when caught sight of the wings.

He was just freaking out when Daniel touched him. He delicately smoothed his fingers along Jack's lesser coverts, stroking the – Jack flicked out the opposite wing – midnight blue feathers. The light caress sent a shiver through Jack's sternum straight to his gut.

"Maybe something with a halter," Daniel whispered. He completed his circuit, fingers trailing over greater primary coverts and then back over the alula and marginal coverts and across Jack's shoulders to his pectorals. Calluses on skin sent another jolt below the belt.

"You're already thicker here," Daniel mused, palm flattening over Jack's peaking nipple. "Do you think they work?"

He lifted his eyes to Jack's.

Jack flexed his wings experimentally, wondering how he knew what to do, feeling the shift of new, strange, yet strangely familiar musculature. The wings swept forward, tips brushing together, enclosing himself and Daniel in a private world of soft, dark blue.

Daniel's eyes widened as his pupils dilated. Daniel looked good in blue.


I totally blame this post.



If you're interested, all my stories, in order, from one page. Also, my fiction recommendations.

Comments

[whisper99.livejournal.com]

"Do you think theY work?"

Aside from that? *faints* Oh my.....

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

Thanks. All fixed!

*catches you*

:)

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

*whimpers*

You need to write a whole story with that. Not. Fair.

[whisper99.livejournal.com]

Yes, what she said. :)

[tejas.livejournal.com]

YES!!!

(HA! I knew Jack liked Daniel in blue!)

I knew you could do it!

[sg1danny.livejournal.com]

Second, third, fourth what she said!!

*fans self with midnight blue fan*

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

*snerks* Yes, I did read your piece this morning. Though I didn't mean to rip you off totally, maybe my subconscious is a plagarist! :D

Thank you for your faith in me. :D

[discodiva76.livejournal.com]

Phewwww.......I'd like those wings of Jack's to come and fan me now please.......


Lovely stuff!....thanks


Deeds xx

[sid]

My pupils are dilating, too! Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

[tejas.livejournal.com]

I do not mind one little bit. It's not like it's much of a secret that the man looks terrific in blue. ;-);-)

[tejas.livejournal.com]

You and me, both. I'm trying to blame it on a hot flash, but I think that's pushing it a touch. ;-)

[avidrosette.livejournal.com]

Loved that! Great stuff with all the flapping gestures and Jack's utter obliviousness. And wow, the wings are sexy; who'd've thunk it?

[princessofg.livejournal.com]

LOLOL

I am so forwarding this to hanarobi. i don't think you have her friended? Do you remember her? Domlij Wingfic????

:D

[chattycatsmeow.livejournal.com]

Hee! I love that Jack was so completely oblivious to the change. He notices everything around him, but not himself. Love the end when he enfolds Daniel in his wings.

Now write wing!smut-fic. :)

[lokei.livejournal.com]

Awesome. I have a massive soft-spot for Wing!Fic, I'm afraid. I clearly read far too much fantasy to be entirely healthy. *grin* Jack with wings is a marvelous image--and Daniel's careful, hands-on examination is breathtaking.

He was just freaking out when Daniel touched him.

I can't say why, exactly, I love this line so much. Perhaps because there is so much 'freaking-because-Daniel-touched-him' first-time-ish fic out there, and this is a 'calmed-because-Daniel-touched-him' moment which could be something new or something familiar, but the comfort is there nonetheless. Lovely.

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

Will you just knock it off? I don't have time for another freakin' kink!

Pretty. :)

(Until Pepe posted a wing!fic in the last week or so, I'd never even heard of it.)

[discodiva76.livejournal.com]

LOVE the icon!!....*giggles*


Deeds xx

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

It does come in handy around here....

Although, yours it tough to top! (So to speak.) :)

[zats-clear.livejournal.com]

so what fandom is Pepe's wing!fic.
and yes, I agree about this kink expansion issue. my closet spilleth over!
may I share your icon? pleasepleasepleasewithsugarontop?

[zats-clear.livejournal.com]

ah, sigh. another day, another twist in my knickers.

*eyes you*

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

Wha? There's more than one fandom? Next you'll be telling me there's more than one OTP! AFAIK her wing!fic's only on the Group messages page. You'll have to go back through a lot of messages to find it (or just ask), I didn't note the date or title.

Yes, my kink list book library needs a new wing. :p

Yep! Icon is shareable, made by pwincess.

[seleneheart]

Holy crap, that's erotic!! And of course, Jack knows the correct labels for all his feathers.

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

"Maybe something with a halter," Daniel whispered.

*dies of guh* SO HOT. *loves love loves*

[cocoajava.livejournal.com]

The wings swept forward, tips brushing together, enclosing himself and Daniel in a private world of soft, dark blue.

I'm sorry, your CJ cannot respond. This is an automated system response. If you are receiving this response, CJ is most likely on the floor twitching. Thank you and have a good day.

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

Oi. We'll see what we see. I swear, this was caused by that pic of Sheppard. I had no other plan. And I've got the vampire thing, and RL and it's wing!fic. Gah.

:p