How upsetting

[brainofck]

OK. That is absolutely the last time I post something without re-reading it. The leather drabble was just a spur-of-of the moment surprise for a friend that I was *trying* to finish in 15 minutes or less.

But just reread the yogurt thing and there were so many hilarious problems with it. OMG. Please tell me, people! Hopefully fixed most of them.

Also, can't see any reason not to put this out as a stand alone. It's complete, it's edited, and it's essentially a PWP, so even if it ends up being in the middle of a timeline, it's not like it's going to spoil any plot or anything.

Share the porn, that's what I say.

Comments

[thalassatx.livejournal.com]

You must have fried my brain with it, because I didn't notice anything but hot men.

Well, good!

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

The true goddammit moment was when Aragorn brought their cocks into "permanent alignment." That sounded very, very upsetting.

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[uisgich.livejournal.com]

IMHO, the perfect state for them to be in ;)

*is LMAO anyway*

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[brainofck.livejournal.com]

Goddammit!

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[thalassatx.livejournal.com]

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!

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[wyldestarr.livejournal.com]

Heh. I thought you did that a'purpose meaning they would be that way again. ;) The A/N about the castle amused me greatly (umm...Google, anyone? I'd need more info to google it for you...castles have lots of rooms and names.) and typos are often quite unintentionally funny. So relax and enjoy writing your smut. It was well-written, regardless of the occasional typo (I rather like 'smeaing' myself...wait, that sounds pervy), and employ another beta if you want. :)

I *still* think 'permanent alignment' is pretty damned funny. Kinky. ^_^

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[brainofck.livejournal.com]

Ugh. Smeaing. *rolls eyes at self*

I'm my own beta. Ergo, if I do not re-read the story, it had no beta. Bad CK!

The typos don't bother me so much. I wrote, "He storked them both," which is another goddammit moment, but people read past it with a giggle.

What I hate is when I do the permanent alignment thing. Cause that's just weird. And then people are like, "What is that supposed to mean? Have I missed some kinky significance here?!" It's one thing to be a bad typist. It's another thing to be a laughably bad writer. *sigh*

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[ullman.livejournal.com]

Aragorn brought their cocks into "permanent alignment."

*dies laughing* Sorry I missed that then, quite a sight that must have been. Seriously though, I would have told you had I noticed it. I'm usually quite sharp about things like that. I'm not to blame here though as you turned me in to a puddle of goo with your writing. ;)

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[brainofck.livejournal.com]

turned me in to a puddle of goo with your writing

THAT's what we like to hear, here at brainofck! :)

[uisgich.livejournal.com]

*points up*

'xactly what she said!!

[brainofck.livejournal.com]

Lurker.