Would it be too terrible

[brainofck]

So, I was reading a story. A decent story. Pretty well written. Entertaining. Hot smut.

But the author wrote, at one point, that someone had a problem they were going to "nip in the butt." This did not appear to be a joke.

Now.

Would it be quite rude for me to feedback to this person that the expression is not, in fact, "nip in the butt?"

Because, on the one hand, I would be very embarrassed to get feedback like that. To the point I might even screen the comment in shame. But I would definitely want to know.

Thoughts?

Comments

[demilo19.livejournal.com]

Tell. I would rather someone tell me my zipper is down so I can fix it and be moderately embarrassed rather than have people all day pointing and starting and going home and seeing it and then freaking out and never coming out of my house again. SO yeah, tell. Esp. if it was a good story - no one wants to be remembered for a typo but rather decent writing.