In need of beta for Dragonwriter piece

OK. Anybody out there read McCaffery more recently than I have (20 years ago) and want to beta a short (less than 3000 words) SG-1 Dragonrider AU for canon acceptability?

Family and writing

While no one is directly interfering with the writing, having everybody here in the room, doing the things they all do, is very, very distracting.