I was looking back at this story because of paian's invation to post five thingses (http://community.livejournal.com/sg1_five_things/40037.html) and found this comment. From November. :s
I am interested in your take on it as Jack saving Daniel. Odd how something that obvious to the reader doesn't sink in when you are writing.
Sweet without being saccarine, and the sad notes are solid
Which is a relief. Writing something like this, one wonders if one is just being maudlin, sometimes.
Thank you for coming by and reading and commenting. So pleased you liked it!
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Date: 2007-02-27 04:33 am (UTC)I am interested in your take on it as Jack saving Daniel. Odd how something that obvious to the reader doesn't sink in when you are writing.
Sweet without being saccarine, and the sad notes are solid
Which is a relief. Writing something like this, one wonders if one is just being maudlin, sometimes.
Thank you for coming by and reading and commenting. So pleased you liked it!