Great stuff. [beam] The image of Jack-as-artifact was very sexy, probably because everyone knows just how intensely Daniel concentrates on his work and that kind of focused attention can be incredibly sexy.
So we're sexy and serious and a bit stylized and then suddenly I'm cracking up 'cause Jack's hacking and sneezing and "drowning in three tablespoons of liquid" and it's just so them that it doesn't even feel jarring. :D
You captured both characters very well, I thought. Good job.
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Date: 2006-07-26 04:53 pm (UTC)So we're sexy and serious and a bit stylized and then suddenly I'm cracking up 'cause Jack's hacking and sneezing and "drowning in three tablespoons of liquid" and it's just so them that it doesn't even feel jarring. :D
You captured both characters very well, I thought. Good job.
Angie