Hi, I just came across this story today, and I just have to say I love your writing style and I like how you always kept it in Daniel's POV and always kept the internal referencing as 'him' or 'he', because even as Daniel was finally being a 'female' and making love to Jack, it was still always him and he, which was a great clue leading up to your final section of this chapter, but also to how he would always view himself, no matter how much he tried to go with the flow and the change. But I'd also like to put my vote in for a Happy ending.
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Date: 2006-03-27 12:13 am (UTC)