I like how you use the metaphor of white. A way for them to blank out the rest of the world and live in their own little snow covered one. Great imagery there :)
Loved how this ended too. I was all worried there for a bit when Jack talked of going home to an empty house even with the snow falling.
I may need to friend you. I'm loving your ficcies :) I hope you don't mind. I just recently got dragged into the loveliness that is SG1.
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Date: 2005-10-24 07:09 pm (UTC)Loved how this ended too. I was all worried there for a bit when Jack talked of going home to an empty house even with the snow falling.
I may need to friend you. I'm loving your ficcies :) I hope you don't mind. I just recently got dragged into the loveliness that is SG1.