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brainofck ([personal profile] brainofck) wrote2007-10-30 08:25 pm
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Because [personal profile] zats_clear re-awoke the muse.

By way of explanation

Twelve

The speaker droned on.

Not fair. The presentation was interesting and important.

Usually Daniel would be all over it. But he was distracted.

Under the table, naked toes were gripping his knee, and easing their way along his inner thigh.

Definitely not a boot.

Jack was slumped in his chair, eyes fixed on the slideshow, the picture of bored concentration.

Obviously it ended while Daniel was trying to figure out how to get rid of those bare toes without anyone else noticing.

He bolted the room in an unseemly, unprofessional manner, making no excuse, not even looking at Jack.

Bastard.



Thirteen
He pulled the long plastic curtain closed behind him . Good enough for don't ask, don't tell. Jack was just done rinsing the soap out of his eyes. Daniel was heavier and stronger than Jack these days. He could curl, press and squat more than Jack probably ever had. Of course, as he went down to his knees in the draining water, that wouldn't matter one bit if Jack kneed him in the face. When Daniel got to his feet, licking saltbitter from his lips, Jack looked shattered. Devastated. Daniel left, nodding to the camera in passing. No more kisses.
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[identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
I'd like to think I awakened her with a gentle nudge or a quiet whisper, but upon reading these, it would appear I kicked her hard in the ass...

very nice!

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Actually, when I posted 13, I noted that I had never posted 12. I was posting them in pairs, back when I was doing this and must have gotten interrupted.

Anyway, I flashed on 13 while commuting. I went and peered at my list of ideas. Perhaps will try to get back to this project.
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[identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 12:21 pm (UTC)(link)
s'alright. This series makes me think of angry sex, really really angry sex. And I like to read things that bring up some kind of emotion in me. So, please, by all means, try to get back to this project!
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[identity profile] zats-clear.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, and to clarify...I know you had your list (and was hoping you would check it out). But you made me laugh when you said I re-awoke the Muse. I think she woke up spitting nails, if your 13 is any indication!

[identity profile] cocoajava.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oooo. Got shivers from the second one.

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm. Excellent.

[identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Wah! 12 was so pretty, and 13 so shattering. :-(

[identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com 2007-10-31 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
13 makes me hurt. Is that Daniel trying to get Jack in trouble, or what? *is hurt and confused*