The Tale Of Benjamin Bunny

[brainofck]

Please to be going to AG33's journal to read The Tale of Benjamin Bunny.

It's the same rules as last time. He's 9, so Mommy previews the comments, and the off color ones will be HISTORY! And I promise you, this one is going to be VERY tempting. Feel free to post off-color comments here, if you must. We can all giggle like grownups together.

Crossposting to brainofck.

Comments

[zats-clear.livejournal.com]

interestingly, I have nothing off-color to say! Your son is a hoot, very imaginative and, um, I snorted my water when I read: Daniel left a great many odd little helmet marks, and Jack stomped around in his boots. Don't know why that particular one got me so much, but I had a visual...
*snorts again*

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Off-color? Us? Never!

(But yeah, don't see it. Sorry.)

[green-grrl.livejournal.com]

You mean this part?:

They went away hand in hand, and got out to SG-1's ready room, where Daniel dressed in his uniform.

Or the h/c when they're hiding in the chassis?

Um, yeah, I go there. :-D

But my favorite parts are Jack hhiding from Janet, Daniel dropping from the rings on his head, and Teal'c rescuing them. Heh!

(p.s. Fraser --> Fraiser)

[alessiana.livejournal.com]

Beyond precious. What a wonderful imagination, no surprise considering he's your son. Fabulous.