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brainofck ([personal profile] brainofck) wrote2005-03-12 08:05 am
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Arena: Chapter 6: Opening

Series/Chapter: Arena - Opening
Author: [livejournal.com profile] muck_a_luck, posting in [livejournal.com profile] brainofck
Pairing: SB/VM (other pairings in later chapters)
Rating: PG
Summary: Viggo is somewhere else, where everyone and no one is the same
Content/warnings: AU. Violence.
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Slash is fiction. So while we may all be demented, slash is basically the author's own porno script, populated by the individuals she feels would be ideal to fill the various roles if she ruled the universe if she were ever fortunate enough have the opportunity to bring her vision to the screen. *snortle*
Archive rights: www.rugbytackling.com, Green Opals, if they're interestd, and my journals [livejournal.com profile] muck_a_luck and [livejournal.com profile] brainofck
Further Disclaimer: Any resemblance to Ancient Rome mostly incidental. I have never seen any gladiator flick. Ever. Honest. Not even stinky Gladiator that stole FOTR's Oscar. *glares*
Blame: [livejournal.com profile] uisgich, for encouraging me



Arena
Water and Oil
Flesh and Iron
Night Terrors
First





"What do I have to do to get the door opened?"

Sennet looked up in surprise at the voice. He hadn't heard his visitor approach. Then he almost choked on the bite of breakfast he had just taken.

Viggo was standing there, in the morning light of Sennet's work room. Sennet looked around in confusion for the person who had spoken.

Viggo took a menacing step forward and laid both hands palms flat on the table.

"What do you want from me?" Viggo demanded, in the same low, dangerous voice that had spoken before.

Sennet started at him. Then began to laugh.

"Well, well! You've managed a trick, haven't you, my wonderful outlander! The Weapons Master assured me you were something close to an idiot. Couldn't understand a word. I can't wait to tell him!" Sennet used his amusement to cover his sudden fear of this man, standing over him, unarmed, but clearly angry and maybe even more dangerous than they had ever thought him.

Viggo returned his laughter with cold silence. Sennet allowed his chuckles to die away in a long-suffering sigh. He gestured to a chair opposite him. Viggo didn't sit, but he did step back from the table and stared at Sennet icily with those pale, alien eyes.

"Fine," he said, "You want the door opened, you swear your loyalty to me. That's the end of it. The door will be open tonight."

"And how do I get my freedom from this place?" Viggo asked, with the same cold anger.

Sennet allowed himself to become angry at that.

"A man who wears a collar and a sword does not concern himself with freedom. He thinks only about his next fight, he trains for it constantly, and he knows that if he fights well he will earn honor and fame for himself and his barracks. That's all a man like yourself should think about. If you keep fighting for me like you fought in the arena yesterday, one day you will earn my gratitude and possibly your freedom."

Viggo lunged forward again, and this time actually laid hold of Sennet, yanking him to his feet, so that they stood face to face over the narrow table. Then just as suddenly, Viggo released him, sending him stumbling a bit with a little shove, shaking in his effort to control his fury.

"I don't fight for you!" he spat. "Let's be clear. My allegiance is to Sean, not to you. And you can be sure that as long as he stays in this barracks and fights for you, I will stay."

"But let's also be clear about something else. We both know how I came here. We both know what you did. I will not earn back the life that you stole from me when you paid that bribe. You will give it to me, or I will take it from you. Don't make me wait too long."

"That's as much of a loyalty oath as you're getting from me," Viggo growled. "Open the door tonight."

Sennet stood backed against the wall, staring in shock at his slave. It was the most ridiculous thing he had ever heard. Here was this barbarian, trying to get the door to his cell unlocked with refusal to swear loyalty and thinly veiled threats on his master's life, and demands for the return of his stolen freedom? He laughed unsteadily to himself. Viggo saw the reaction. He turned on his heel to stalk from the room.

"No, Viggo! Wait!" Sennet managed.

Viggo stopped where he was and turned to face him.

"Sit." Sennet ordered.

To his surprise, Viggo did.

Sennet returned to his seat and his breakfast, gesturing that Viggo should join him, but not surprised when his slave rather leaned back in his seat and crossed his arms, the picture of a man whose time is being wasted. The arrogance of the barbarian was both shocking and amusing.

"What made you happy, in your former life?" Sennet asked, as he might while enjoying a pleasant breakfast with another citizen.

Viggo didn't even pause.

"My son."

That brought Sennet up short. He thought for a moment.

"Well, it seems to me that considering where I found you, your son was long lost to you before I..." He paused, groping for an appropriate word. "...intervened."

Viggo was watching him closely. The statement earned a grudging nod.

"My horses. My dogs. My art. Mountains. Deserts."

The list somehow fit the man. Sennet went on with his breakfast, thinking carefully.

Finally, he stood.

"Wait here for me," he said, and went into the next room.


Viggo's heart was pounding. He had never been so angry and afraid. Furious at this man who controlled him. Furious at himself because the real reason he was here was not to demand his "freedom," but more liberties within his slavery. But he thought he had drawn the line well, and Sennet seemed remarkably respectful of his outrage.

Yet.

Viggo waited for the guards to come in and kill him. Or worse, drag him to some auction block somewhere to be sold to a new master and never see Sean, the Sean of this world, who wasn't even really Sean... Never see even him again.

But instead, Sennet came back from the other room. He set a largish leather pouch on the table with a solid sounding thump.

"It's tradition for a warrior to receive a gift from his master after his first victory," Sennet commented mildly.

"When the Sword Master gives you a rest day, take this and have Sean show you around town. Go down to the horse markets if you like. There's plenty of room in my stable for any beast you buy. Find a mare worth breeding, and you can have stud service from any of my stallions."

Sennet was giving him a sly smile.

"Now go on. I want to get on with my business."

And with that Viggo was dismissed. As he stood and left the room with Sennet's gift, he could hear the man chuckling behind him.

Closing

[identity profile] ladybluelove.livejournal.com 2005-03-12 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I am enjoying your fic so very much...action/adventure...with a hint of smut!

I can't wait for the next battle, their excursion shopping, and hopefully some down right long drawn out smutty smut...yeah...could do with more smut in my life!!!

Thank you dear, I really like it so far, very creative, well researched, and well written!!! `;-p~

Research?

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-12 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Research! *sniggers*

However, so glad you are enjoying it! :)

Have you been good and not read ahead? There is smut... :P

Re: Research?

[identity profile] ladybluelove.livejournal.com 2005-03-12 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes I have been very good although...**I should get a reward*

Ha! Research! *sniggers*

Well you could've fooled me...I felt like I was watching something like Ben~Hur...But with my fav. OTP...You're doing a fantastic job...I LOVE IT!!! :)~

Re: Research?

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-13 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
Yes I have been very good although...**I should get a reward*

You should be good. Don't spoil yourself! But I have no really good smut to offer as a reward.

Hmmmmm. Maybe I could write the next couple of chapters of Dark Muse. :)

The only research I did was to see if I was even close to how gladiators would be treated. And according to this one site I saw, they got the best food, best medical treatment, and had groupies and fangirls for all the sex they wanted. My research, ladies and gentlemen! :P Never even saw Gladiator. Or Ben Hur. *hangs head*

Re: Research?

[identity profile] ladybluelove.livejournal.com 2005-03-13 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmmmm. Maybe I could write the next couple of chapters of Dark Muse. :)

That would be a nice reward...That would be a really nice reward!!! I just reread the the first 4 chaps. of Dark Muse, I've forgotten how really good they are...yes, That would be a very good reward indeed! **Closes eyes and prays to all the smut gods to please allow brainofck to grant this reward!**`;-D~

[identity profile] wyldestarr.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooo, go Viggo! *glares and kicks locked chapter link* You're a rotten tease, you know that, right? :P

But this...this has me most curious:
"But let's also be clear about something else. We both know how I came here. We both know what you did. I will not earn back the life that you stole from me when you paid that bribe. You will give it to me, or I will take it from you. Don't make me wait too long."

...

"Well, it seems to me that considering where I found you, your son was long lost to you before I..." He paused, groping for an appropriate word. "...intervened."


I want to know just what happened to bring Viggo to this place and just how Sennet 'intervened'. Most curious indeed.

Intervention

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
You're a rotten tease, you know that, right?

Dude. Even if I opened the next couple, we'd be up against a wall, because I wrote the +5 stuff before I finished the +3 stuff, and therefore, there are some massive continuity probs that must be resolved, and that's not happenin' til next week. RL. Sorry. :P

On the other thing, that's an interesting question. I have no idea how Viggo got here. The stolen life and intervention Viggo's talking about is just the fact that he wasn't supposed to be a slave in that first arena battle, and Sennet paid a bribe and bought him.

It's never bothered me very much that I don't know how Viggo got here. The problem is, what to do with him at the end of this story? Which has no end. A situation that bothers me very much. You have an ending for me? To that extent, I suppose it might have helped if I had some explanation for how he got here...

*ponders*

Re: Intervention

[identity profile] wyldestarr.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I guess I've just been so curious about how he got there, that it was how I read that passage. Seeing you explain how you wrote it makes me read it differently. You actually don't 'have' to explain how he got there, it's enough to know he's there and dealing with it all. There are a lot of ways you could end the story, but without knowing how he got there, my mind will lean towards him living his life out here - whether that be long and fruitful or shortly to end, that's up to you. You could have a lot of fun with it and have a few dalliances and wind up making him his own ancestor, but that's just cause I have a slightly twisted mind. Ooo, and think of all the fun things you can do with time travel. ^_^

And I can deal with RL stuff. Doesn't mean I won't whine good-naturedly though. ;) I like the story, I like the premise, I want more. I'm a greedy wench, what can I say?

Re: Intervention

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm a greedy wench, what can I say?

I say you're just fishing for a birthday story, is what I say. :p

Please feel free to tease at will. :)

Actually, I don't see this as time travel, anyway. I see it as more parallel universe. And in the story in my head, one other person is going to eventually show up from Wellington. Waaaaayyy down the plot road...

Re: Intervention

[identity profile] wyldestarr.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I say you're just fishing for a birthday story, is what I say. :p
Meh...pffffffffft. :P I never try and coerce/manipulate anyone into doing things. I'm a little too impatient and a little too opinionated for that route, so I just come out and say things. *grins* Besides, I don't post on stories I don't like. You have Sean...and Viggo...and weapons...oh, I like weapons...mmm....swords...and armor! Oh, I like armor too! And smut! Smut is good, yes yes! And lookie there! PLOT! Woot! See now, everything I like in a fic.

And by its very nature, time travel is parallel (well, until someone actually figures it and I'd just as soon they didn't), but it's a quibble. ;) There are still TONS of ways you could go with this.

Re: Intervention

[identity profile] wyldestarr.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
You know...I don't NEED plotbunnies. I have my own and I just managed to send a poetry one to the bunnyfarm, I don't need another. And they're annoying. So tell yours to go away. *shoos bunny towards you* I keep having ideas how you could work this! I'd be happy to give them to you. *glances helplessly at bunnies at her feet*

Re: Intervention

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
:)

Alas, I'm afraid that the part of the plot that is spawning your bunnies is not the part of the plot that is eating mine like a big, 25 foot long black snake...

[identity profile] nieninque121.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
love how Viggo´s trying to take charge of his life again.
stud services...*gigglesnorts* is that what they called it back then? =D

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Laughing at you! :)

[identity profile] lunithil.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Viggo knows how he came to be there? Wish he'd let me in on the secret.
Adore the story, but one thing puzzles me. Chapter 6 already and no smut?

Absence of smut

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-18 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Chapter 6 already and no smut?

Patience will be rewarded in this story. Trust me. *hand over heart*

[identity profile] ladybluelove.livejournal.com 2005-03-19 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
*licks lunithil icon...a lot* :)~

[identity profile] lunithil.livejournal.com 2005-03-19 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Me too, lol. I wish I could remember where I got it from, cos I'm sure there was more...

[identity profile] ladybluelove.livejournal.com 2005-03-19 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*lick,lick,slurp* No worries I'll just perv over yours!LOL! :)~

[identity profile] alexabond.livejournal.com 2005-03-19 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
Great work! I hope Viggo wins/steals his freedom soon! *hugs*

Quit fishing for spoilers! *snickers*

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-19 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Remains to be seen... :p

[identity profile] frickabrandis.livejournal.com 2005-03-20 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Hadn´t had the time for two days to visit my flist. I was ever so glad to find a new chapter now.
I love this story! Am I correct in assuming it will be quite long? (nods head hopefully)

Length

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-20 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Current word count is approx. 25,000 words, or 61 single spaced manuscript pages, and as of now I think you've read about half of it. And I think final word count, if I really write it all, might go to 50,000.

So yes, possibly quite long. :) Pleased you are hopeful for more, not less. :P

[identity profile] helena-s-renn.livejournal.com 2005-03-26 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
honestly, your writing continues to impress me. its so interesting watching viggo learning how to navigate in this new world he's stuck in. his interactions with the slave owner just prove how very good he is, as an actor. just the right balance of arrogant and still giving the other man just enough of the responses he wanted to buy some of what viggo wanted. you really played that up... go you!

Viggo adapts

[identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com 2005-03-26 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I like this Viggo. He and I have worked through some things. Sennet, alas, was originally a sympathetic character, not so actively involved in betraying them. But I needed a reason for Viggo to give up his "I won't be a hired killer" mentality. His relationship with Sennet becomes a big part of that change.

[identity profile] belleimani.livejournal.com 2005-07-21 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely done Vig. Nicely done.