brainofck | And so it continues

And so it continues

Today I began the rewrite on the fairy tale. I have a good solid plot built and my plan is to spend the next month taking it scene by scene to build in better dialogue and human interaction. Also want to develop the romance more convincingly. And I need to research more guns.

Today, I reworked the part where the extraction team goes to rescue General West and gets captured. Fun times. :)

I hope to have a really excellent story by May 1.