ext_59167 ([identity profile] maccadole.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brainofck 2008-11-09 03:24 pm (UTC)

Aw, that was adorable. I like the scene cuts and the progress of it. How the confusing fuzzy beginning just melts into the natural 'this is the way it's supposed to be' ending for the boys.

Well written, and very cute. I adore cute fic!
Thanks for writing this.

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