brainofck ([identity profile] brainofck.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brainofck 2008-02-16 12:18 pm (UTC)

Jack snuck out, brushed his teeth, and came back, because he really wanted to make a good first impression.

*smirking Daniel with morning wood I'll be in my bunk

Hmmmmm. Do I need to incorporate a rampant, smirking Daniel into every story? :D

natural movement of events

It's funny how a story can take on a certain logic then start pulling you in ways you didn't intend. That's sort of what happened to me here. Jack got friendly, Daniel liked it, it made him miss his wife, and so on. Maybe the Brain took me in the right direction, I dunno. It just wasn't where I planned to go.

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