ext_1503 ([identity profile] princessofg.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brainofck 2008-02-15 01:20 pm (UTC)

oh my god this is perfect.

i love how you reveal the back story.... i just... *guh*

i particularly love the paragraph where daniel explains to jack how much he trusts daniel and it makes jack cranky and daniel doesn't even care how cranky jack is at that point because daniel has understood, and jack's cranky as a reflex because it worries him to be this open to someone! that is just totally IC and gorgeous.

and the way daniel thinks of both sha're and jack... and the way jack knows part of what's going on but not all of it, and the way it's post Shades of Grey that it's all settled.

YOU DA MAN!!!!!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

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