Went back and read the first two chapters. I know they're not very VigBean, but one gets the impression that they're *leading* toward VigBean as the story progresses, so that ought to count for this archive, oughtn't it? (she says, casting her vote) Ordinarily I don't go all that much for Elijah/any of the more mature guys, but the first two chapters were quite fun. The second in particular gave me good giggle, and this one keeps up the good work. Others commenting before me have pretty much covered whatever else I'd say, so I'll let it go at yay! - Looking forward to Next!