ext_837 ([identity profile] justhuman.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brainofck 2006-07-04 11:32 pm (UTC)

Really enjoyed this and the fact that you didn't take the easy road, just making them happy with the alien devices. I applauded when Daniel got control again and took them to the mountain. I also liked the realistic streak that it wouldnt' all be about sex and that they could spend time apart. Well constructed with a dose of hot sex -- two thumbs up :-)

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