Now that's a nice way to deal with what you've got. Like very much!

What's really faszinating me is how you describe the progress of their change, how they try to deal with "imposed" want and the remaining part of their brain that says "No!".

In the end I'm somewhat sorry for Daniel to be "left alone" with the implant. He must have been worried what'll happen if Jack just wants to forget everything. But I'm glad you let it go this way. :)