Do you know what I love? That I, having seen only a smattering of SG1 episodes, can totally know the characters completely with your fics. :) I loved how you dealt with the slavery issue and the end! OMGuh! I'd feel sorry for Daniel, but I'm wagering Jack will more than make it up for him. :D The internal dialogue was great and I grinned throughout (when I wasn't struggling for a breath).

Loved it! *squoosh*